所以我说你的英语有欠缺吗!!就像你说的那样好吧!!也不是What````like,而是What does```look like.What does someone look like.书面语和口语是不一样的!!我为什么要用What's my Mr right,而不用What does my Mr right look like.首先第一点,我还正在寻找我的(他),因为,我还没有。第二点,我主要就是想说;我的(他)白马王子是什么样,怎么样的等等。
What's my Mr right! Not only he'll take good care of me,but he could also be able to make me happy and play games with me every day. And I'll feel happiness if I look at him.He won't lie to me.This is the type of the guys who I am hunting for. I am looking for my Mr right,even I always hope to realize my dream. But it's only my dream. 
I really hope to meet a guy someday.And we will love each other.Then I will take him to my hometown to meet my parents.I'll tell my parents that he is my boyfriend,we'll be married soon.Then he goes to work and I cook meals for him at home every day.
前一段时间,我对我的文章做一下小小的修补。现在看来绝对地道多了!!